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1 Wind Breath Jutsu on Mon Jul 28, 2014 5:02 am

Hitomi Shiruku

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Name: Winded Breathing: Futon Kokyuu
Rank: B
Type:ninjutsu
Used For:Both
Element:Wind
Range:Short Range *5 meters or less*
Duration: 3 turns
Hand Seals/Charge up: Ox-Monkey-Boar
Description:
Offensive:
Conseals or Constricts the target's breathing.
The user takes control of the breathable area of wind within the target's lungs and constraints it from movement by using chakra, aka chocking them in the process from lack of oxygen. Depending on how long the user casts the jutsu is how long the target is without breathing. This is an alterable jutsu that can be cast with very little sight and active whenever the user sees fit. This can also be used upon multiple people without much knowledge to what's in them.

1 post=chocking/intial shock
2 posts=actual breath loss/lightheaded
3 posts=Passed out *unless one can breath through other means aka water breath*

Defensive:
One can constraint a small pocket of air for themselves to breath with by using their chakra.
The user can keep themselves from being chocked to death or drowning by keeping a pocket of air to slowly breath from until released from the breath restricting jutsu cast upon them. The chakra itself goes into the lungs and opens the airways for breathing. Morso if the heart stops or lungs stop then it can maneuver them which is similar to CPR however without mouth to mouth treatment or risk of rib fractures.

Weakness:
Fire jutsu can stop this jutsu from chocking oneself due to fire jutsu heating the body and causing a disruption in this jutsu(physical movement by self) HOWEVER this isn't the same for lightning jutsu due to the fact it's weaker to wind jutsu.
User cannot move when this jutsu is being used
CPR works on others, not on self(wouldn't be able to concentrate for the jutsu)
Water breathers can avoid this attack all together
This needs concentration, anyone attacking with heavy physical moves can stop the jutsu *aka if someone punches the target that target is no longer under the jutsu*



Last edited by Hitomi Shiruku on Thu Jul 31, 2014 1:50 am; edited 2 times in total


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2 Re: Wind Breath Jutsu on Mon Jul 28, 2014 5:29 am

Kid Koopa

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this is gonna need some changes. The problem being you just use the air in their lungs. You have to use chakra as a medium, so first if you expel a breath that's a tad bit noticeable from the chakra into the air and they breathe it in then this will work. As a bonus I'd make the chakra cling to their lungs for like 3 post, so the jutsu doesn't have to be used immediately and so it can affect multiple people, but you can target them at different times. Just a suggestion, but the first part is a necessary edit.


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3 Re: Wind Breath Jutsu on Mon Jul 28, 2014 7:38 am

Hitomi Shiruku

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changed it, anything else?


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4 Re: Wind Breath Jutsu on Thu Jul 31, 2014 1:34 am

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Winded Breathing: Futon Kokyuu
I feel as though this technique should be a higher rank simply due to its utility, or else make the drawbacks more evident. Make it evident that the castor must be stationary and explain how Katon makes this technique ineffective. Also, I noticed mentions of CPR; I assume this is done on someone else? (Because if it’s done on yourself, it’s impossible seeing as if your lungs collapse or heart stops, you’re pretty much dead and won’t have the concentration or conscious-mind needed to use this). It’s just a case of making things clearer for the staff and fellow readers to actually see and receive as useable information.



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5 Re: Wind Breath Jutsu on Thu Jul 31, 2014 1:51 am

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k fixed it up with more weakness explination


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6 Re: Wind Breath Jutsu on Thu Jul 31, 2014 10:14 pm

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Thank you for making the edits. Approved.


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