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Akio Kaguya Jutsu [FIN]

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1 Akio Kaguya Jutsu [FIN] on Mon Aug 25, 2014 5:42 pm

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All of these customs were developed by Akio and are not copy-able unless learned through him

Name: Shikotsumyaku Ultimate Defense - Walking Fortress
Rank: S
Type: Tai/Bloodline
Used For: Defense
Element: N/A
Range: User
Duration: Until broken
Hand Seals/Charge up: 1 Post
Description: The user squats down and his arms hang limp between their knees, almost touching the ground as they slouch over a bit. Focusing chakra into all their bones their skeletal system begins to grow at a alarming rate. Forcing the bone up against their skin the user takes on a more bulky appearance as their bones change. Bone fills the middle of each rip and stretches to cover their stomach. This jutsu causes ones bones to grow which in turn gives them some interesting features, such as more profound cheeks and chest along with a slightly pointy chin. However if one is not use to this the pain that is caused while the bones are expanding a stretching they can be a bit overwhelmed.

The bone that is now pressing against the users skin serves almost as an armor. Causing any weapon below B-Rank to seemingly glance off with nothing more then a cut to the skin on the surface. However B-Rank and A-Rank weapons will be able to damage the bone, but will seemingly not cause much damage without several hits. B-Rank will have no luck in breaking any of the harder bones only finding luck while focusing on the arm, legs or face. While A-Rank and above will be able to break up the armor, but not without a good bit of effort.

Along with all of this the bone armor also helps defend against ninjutsu. Causing C-Rank and below to have no effect on the users. However the armor does help against the higher ranked jutsu. Causing B-Rank to be as strong as a C-Rank as A-Rank and S-Rank only do about half damage to the user.

Armor Durability:

Arm, legs and face:
B-Rank: 4 hits
A-Rank: 3 hits
S-Rank: 2 hit

Torso:
A-Rank: 4
S-Rank: 3

Repairing the Armor:
Also since Kaguya can replace and mend bone the armor can be repaired when damaged if the user is willing to pay for the repairs. However this will cost the user some chakra to do so and can only be done a set amount of times.

Minor Cracks [1-2 hit from B-Rank on limbs, 1-2 hit from A-Rank on torso, 1 hit from A-Rank on limbs]: Same as using a B-Rank jutsu.

Major Breaks: [3 hits from B-Rank on limbs, 3 hits from A-Rank on torso, 2 hits from A-Rank on limbs, 2 hits from S-Rank on Torso, 1 hit from S-Rank on limbs]: Same as an A-Rank jutsu.

Destroyed [Only able to be done with the limbs]: Same as an A-Rank jutsu

The user can only repair 3 cracks, 2 breaks and 1 destroyed piece of armor in a single thread.

Weakness:

1. Cause this jutsu puts so much stress on the users body 5 posts after it

Fatigue:
D-Rank - Collapse after use
C-Rank - Will have trouble walking without assistance
B-Rank - Very tired and will make anymore fighting difficult, no jutsu for 3 post. Then after that only C-Rank and lower
A-Rank - Tired, May still fight with their jutsu, but no for the next 2 post. Then only up to B-Rank
S-Rank - Will not have much effect except S-Rank jutsu will not be available for 2 posts

[Taijutsu, Bukijutsu, Fuinjutsu and Kugutsu excluded]

[Adept or higher Medical ninjutsu may bump the user up one on the rank if the user get medical attention for 1 post]

2. While the armor is active the user is slightly slower meaning if they are fighting someone with their skills they will lag behind slightly

3. The stress on the body is so great that the user may only use this technique once per thread.

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Name: Ten-Finger Needle Storm
Rank: C
Type: Tai/Bloodline
Used For: Offensive
Element: N/A
Range: 30 Meters
Duration: Until 30 senbon have been used
Hand Seals/Charge up: N/A
Description: Adapting a well known jutsu from his clan, Ten-Finger Drilling Bullets, Akio has been able to fired senbon instead of bullets. The long and slender senbon allow him to shoot the bone projectile further then the bone and he can even fire more projectiles. However seeing as they are smaller projectiles they aren't very deadly, but their gain in velocity allows the senbon to dig deeper then average senbon while causing more damage. The bone senbon can rip up skin and flesh easily and even excavate small chunks of bone on contact.

Since Akio can manipulate the senbon they are barbed and therefore ripping them out will cause the victim to bleed profusely and cause more damage then just leaving them in.
Weakness:

The Senbon aren't very deadly unless they hit vital points and therefore one or two won't do very much to the opponent unless placed strategically.

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Name: Shikotsumyaku Branching Clone
Rank: A
Type: Bloodline
Used For: Supplementary
Element: KKG
Range: 1 Mile
Duration: Until dispersed or canceled
Hand Seals/Charge up: N/A
Description: Extending one or both of their arms to their sides the user uses the KKG of the Kaguya clan to form a clone in their figure. Since the technique uses the KKG instead of ninjutsu the clones cost no chakra to create.

Since the clone are created from pure Kaguya bone they a ridiculously durable causing the user's opponent to use some effort to dispatch them. In terms of attacks it would take around 4 A-Rank or 2 S-Rank attacks to destroy the bone duplicates.
Weakness:

1. Since the user creates the clone using his KKG it can not use any elemental jutsu.

2. Since the clone is made completely out of bone it is easy to tell the difference between the clone and the user.

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Name: Shikotsumyaku Passing Bone
Rank: S
Type: Tai/Bloodline
Used For: Offensive
Element: KKG
Range: 0-15 meters
Duration: 3 posts or when deactivated
Hand Seals/Charge up: Clap hands together
Description: The user claps both of their hands together and quickly forms a drill-like bone structure around their hands and wrist. After which they replicate the movements of the Inuzuka Clan's technique, Passing Fang, and spin at high speeds. With the bone to enhance the spinning power this technique can cut through trees, chakra reinforced earth walls, stone, and even injure Bijuu
Weakness:

1. Since the users hands are in use they must end the technique before being able to wield a weapon/tool or even trying to form hand seals for the next jutsu.

2. Must either know Fang Passing Fang before hand or have knowledge of the technique via Fuinjutsu perks.

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2 Re: Akio Kaguya Jutsu [FIN] on Tue Aug 26, 2014 7:50 pm

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Bump


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D-Rank Jutsu: 10 Chakra Cost/ 5 Chakra
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A-Rank Jutsu: 50 Chakra Cost
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3 Re: Akio Kaguya Jutsu [FIN] on Thu Aug 28, 2014 8:43 pm

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Under Review

Ten-Finger Needle Storm is approved.

Walking Fortress seems like it would be a forbidden technique.

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4 Re: Akio Kaguya Jutsu [FIN] on Fri Aug 29, 2014 1:45 am

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While the jutsu leaves the user greatly fatigued and puts stress on the body it does not pose any threat to the user's life. Therefore it doesn't classify in that category as a kinjutsu. Also seeing as it is not an offensive jutsu it can not cause large amounts of damage and it certainty doesn't violate the laws of nature. Sorry to disagree with you, but I see no reason for this to be a kinjutsu. While it may come close it does finely walk the line. If you see anything that screams forbidden that I missed please don't be afraid to tell me, just giving my input.


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A-Rank Jutsu: 50 Chakra Cost
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5 Re: Akio Kaguya Jutsu [FIN] on Fri Aug 29, 2014 3:28 am

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Approved

Aight. Do note that if staff do not like, they can always come back and have you change stuff.

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6 Re: Akio Kaguya Jutsu [FIN] on Fri Dec 12, 2014 12:44 am

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Branching Clone - Uh. Bump the rank. Far too durable to be C.

Passing Bone - Check below.

All - Where my hand seals at? Clone technique can simply be Clone Seal. With the second technique having two or three hand seals to initiate.

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7 Re: Akio Kaguya Jutsu [FIN] on Fri Dec 12, 2014 1:32 am

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Branching Clone: Clones branch off of the user's hand via bone, so to hand seals needed, also bumped up

Passing Bone: Doesn't require a 'hand seal', but user mush clap their hands together and hold it while bone forms


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C-Rank Jutsu: 25 Chakra Cost/ 12.5 Chakra
B-Rank Jutsu: 40 Chakra Cost/ 20 Chakra
A-Rank Jutsu: 50 Chakra Cost
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8 Re: Akio Kaguya Jutsu [FIN] on Fri Dec 12, 2014 1:34 am

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Mhmm. Approved.

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9 Re: Akio Kaguya Jutsu [FIN] on Sat Dec 13, 2014 6:58 am

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LE BUMP


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10 Re: Akio Kaguya Jutsu [FIN] on Mon Dec 15, 2014 4:39 am

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Name: True Power of The Shikotsumyaku - Embodiment of Death: Incomplete Transformation
Rank: A (For Upkeep See Sacrifice System)
Type: Bloodline/Kinjutsu
Used For: Offensive
Element: N/A
Range: N/A
Duration: Maintainable
Hand Seals/Charge up: See Sacrifice System
Description:
Appearance:

Channeling on his focus on his KKG the user rapidly forces as much calcium to form as possible, resulting in higher density of calcium in the bones allowing them to harden to the strength of steel. While doing so the user will also call upon the souls of his ancestors and harvest the souls of sacrificed to aid him in completing the transformation.

Since the technique requires sacrifice it is considered a kinjutsu. Also the faces of ancestors and sacrifices appear on the users ragged skin after the transformation, allowing anyone to know who was sacrificed upon closer inspection.

Once transformed the user's skin will appear tattered and decaying as his bones are forced against his skin and can be seen. Along with all facial features disappearing the user becomes unlike themselves and extremely violent. However, with the eyes, ears and other features gone the user is still able to hear, see and even smell their surroundings as if they never changed. While the transformation takes time the user can still move, but can not use any elemental ninjutsu. Continuing on with the process the users feet are surrounded by a grayish-black smoke-like shroud that is made up of purely souls. This shroud allows the user to use the souls in a custom jutsu type that manipulates the souls into a solid form that can move at the user's will.

Since this is the Lesser form of the two the user can not use any soul jutsu above B-Rank and must have two sacrifices in total to use any of the techniques.

After completing the transformation the user will then create a scythe out of bone that is also powered by fallen souls. For the scythe to be form the user must have three total sacrifices as well. Seeing as the transformation causes the skin to go into disrepair the user can not feel much pain compared to before. Along with the higher pain tolerance the user's reinforced bones cause ninja tools C-Rank and below to bounce off of the user. Also the user's blood takes on the look of the soul shroud and shrieks can be heard when they bleed. However, this little detail should not be overlooked. Since the blood is intertwined with the souls the user is immune to all poison however the same goes for any consumables and even medical ninjutsu while in this form, both harmful and helpful. While the souls kill any pathogens that attempt to enter the blood it also allows for the blood to clot rather quickly, keeping the user from bleeding out.

Along with the look of the transformation and perks it also gives the user advantages. Their bodies are way more durable, their chakra pool in this form increase by a set scale, their Taijutsu and Bukijutsu CS raise by a single rank each.

However, while the user is granted with heavy advantages the jutsu has several disadvantages. Such as having to make sacrifices, heavy chakra usage at first, and no practical elemental jutsu. Also to learn the jutsu the user must train it IC and provide double the amount of WC then what is required for the rank of the jutsu.

Finally, if the user dies while in this form they will stay in the form, rendering any DNA useless and the body unidentifiable by just examination. However, if they are knocked out or deactivate the jutsu they will slowly progress back to normal after two posts or in the next thread.

Sacrifice Systems

Chakra Upkeep:

S-Rank Upkeep: 1 Sacrifice

A-Rank Upkeep: 2 Total Sacrifices

B-Rank Upkeep: 3 Total Sacrifices

C-Rank Upkeep: 5 Total Sacrifices

Charge Up:

3 Posts: 1 Sacrifice

2 Posts: 2 Total Sacrifices

1 Post: 3 Total Sacrifices

Transform in Matter of seconds: 5 Total Sacrifices (1 B-Rank+)

Unlockables:

Activate Transformation: Training and 1 total sacrifice

Soul Jutsu: 2 Total sacrifices

Scythe: 3 Total sacrifices (LINK)

Weakness:

1. Must be trained and requires double WC.

2. While in this form Akio can not use practical elemental Jutsu.

3. Must sacrifice 1 PC character (C-Rank or above) before learning jutsu.

4. All sacrifices must be PC characters and at least C-Rank.

5. Must do a second training of 1000 words to be able to control ones self while in the form otherwise the user can't tell friend from foe.

6. All soul jutsu is custom and must be approved by Staff.

7. User can only use soul jutsu up to B-Rank in this form.

8. Must have 2 total sacrifices to use soul jutsu.

9. Soul jutsu must be trained as an Advance Element

10. Upkeep starts at S-Rank; changes based on sacrifices.

11. Scythe must be custom created and approved to use.

12. Must have 3 total sacrifices to summon scythe.

13. While the user is in this form they are immune to most medical ninjutsu whether it be helpful or harmful. However, this does not include chakra scalpel.

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Name: True Power of The Shikotsumyaku - Embodiment of Death: Complete Transformation
Rank: S
Type: Bloodline/ Kinjutsu
Used For: Offensive
Element: N/A
Range: N/A
Duration: Maintainable
Hand Seals/Charge up: See Sacrifice System
Description:
Appearance:

This is the second half to the Kaguya kinjutsu derived by Akio Kaguya, True Power of The Shikotsumyaku - Embodiment of Death. By continuing to concentrate on the transformation the user's bones become even stronger. Allowing only being able to be damaged by C-Rank jutsu and above (B-Rank if Taijutsu). Also weapons or tools below S-Rank seemed to do nothing against the much larger skeletal beast.

After the transformation progresses far enough the user begins to look more like a skeleton while losing small features. The bone becomes smooth and more bulky while small details seem to disappear. While the user starts to become less recognizable in the form more advantages are gained.

While they keep the perk of elevated Bukijutsu and Taijutsu skills the user also begins to grow exponentially. They grow to be the size of Tailed Beast while there clothing begins to become even more ragged. Several of the bones that make up there body look even more decayed despite their reinforced defense. Although their insides are exposed their organs are none existent. Instead they are replaced by  purple and black glow of the soul shrouds from the incomplete transformation. Along with the large shroud ball in their rib cage they also have multiple small portions of the same shroud that dance along their figure. Lacing around their entire body the shroud dances in several chains that swirl around the user's body.

In this part of the transformation the user seems to have great strength and speed compared to their much larger figure. Like the previous half of the transformation the user can create a bone scythe as well as use soul jutsu. However, unlike the previous version the scythe is much larger to be in proportion with the user's new form and they can even utilize S-Rank soul jutsu techniques.

When the user can finally use this half of the kinjutsu they are opened to a whole new kind of power. Depending on how many sacrifices they make they can do anything from speeding up the transformation time or even raise their chakra pool while in the transformation. Although the upgrades will cost a decent amount of sacrifices and better quality ones at that.

Also like the inferior version of the transformation they can not use any elemental jutsu (at first) and are immune to normal medical ninjutsu be it harmful or helpful, while also being immune to all forms of poison. Along with the disadvantages the user must also train soul jutsu as an Advanced Element and must have all five sacrifices put into the incomplete version of the transformation. Also for further upgrades the user must allocate so many sacrifices to gain the upgrades. Although all of the sacrifices from the incomplete version do not count toward any upgrades for the complete version

All Sacrifice Upgrades Must Be Allocated Individual Souls And Must Be Done In Order

Chakra Pool:

50 More Points Total - 1 Sacrifice

100 More Points Total - 2 Sacrifices

150 More Points Total - 2 Sacrifices


Transformation Charge Up:

4 Posts - Upon Learning

3 Posts - 1 Sacrifice

2 Posts - 2 Sacrifices

1 Post - 2 Sacrifices


Chakra Upkeep:

S-Rank - Upon Learning

A-Rank - 1 Sacrifices

B-Rank - 2 Sacrifices

C-Rank - 2 Sacrifices

D-Rank - 3 Sacrifices


Unlockables:

Soul Jutsu - Upon Learning

Scythe - Upon Learning

Elemental Jutsu - 3 Sacrifices


Soul Jutsu Charge Up:

-1 Post - 1 Sacrifice

-2 Posts - 2 Sacrifices

-3 Posts - 2 Sacrifices


Soul Jutsu Chakra Cost:

-1 Rank - 1 Sacrifice

-2 Ranks - 2 Sacrifices

Weakness:

1. Must have learned the first half of this jutsu, True Power of Shikotsumyaku - Incomplete Transformation: Embodiment of Death

2. Must learn this technique through training.

3. Must have all 5 sacrifices toward the incomplete transformation before learning the complete transformation.

4. All sacrifices toward this technique must be PC that are C-Rank or above.

5. Must have soul jutsu trained as an Advanced Element to use it.

6. All soul jutsu is custom and must be approved by staff.

7. While the user is in this form they are immune to most medical ninjutsu, whether it be helpful or harmful. However, this does not include chakra scalpel.

8. If the user has not learned how to control themselves in the incomplete version of the transformation they can not control this form.

9. While in this form the user is unable to use any elemental jutsu until they unlock it via the Sacrifice System.

10. All sacrifices must be made IC



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E-Rank Jutsu: 5 Chakra Cost/ 2.5 Chakra
D-Rank Jutsu: 10 Chakra Cost/ 5 Chakra
C-Rank Jutsu: 25 Chakra Cost/ 12.5 Chakra
B-Rank Jutsu: 40 Chakra Cost/ 20 Chakra
A-Rank Jutsu: 50 Chakra Cost
S-Rank Jutsu: Cannot Use
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11 Re: Akio Kaguya Jutsu [FIN] on Mon Dec 15, 2014 6:23 am

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Bump - Before I write up the description for the second part I would like to know if the incomplete transformation is okay, thank you.


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D-Rank Jutsu: 10 Chakra Cost/ 5 Chakra
C-Rank Jutsu: 25 Chakra Cost/ 12.5 Chakra
B-Rank Jutsu: 40 Chakra Cost/ 20 Chakra
A-Rank Jutsu: 50 Chakra Cost
S-Rank Jutsu: Cannot Use
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12 Re: Akio Kaguya Jutsu [FIN] on Mon Dec 15, 2014 1:48 pm

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Bumpity Bump - All ready for reviewing! ^_^


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D-Rank Jutsu: 10 Chakra Cost/ 5 Chakra
C-Rank Jutsu: 25 Chakra Cost/ 12.5 Chakra
B-Rank Jutsu: 40 Chakra Cost/ 20 Chakra
A-Rank Jutsu: 50 Chakra Cost
S-Rank Jutsu: Cannot Use
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13 Re: Akio Kaguya Jutsu [FIN] on Sun Dec 21, 2014 5:16 am

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Name: Bone Golem
Rank: A
Type: Bloodline
Used For: Offensive
Element: KKG
Range: As far as the user grows their bones
Duration: 8 Posts
Hand Seals/Charge up: N/A
Description: Slamming their palms on the ground the user extends their bones into the ground. Being approximately a meter thick the two stocks of bone emerge from the ground somewhere around the user as they spiral up and into the body of the golem. Once created the golem will stand at around 5 meters tall with no part of the body being thinner then half a foot, the smallest piece being the fingers. Being made from a Kaguya's bones the golem is extremely durable being immune to all Suiton jutsu and any Raiton jutsu that isn't hot enough to burn it, S-Rank only. Along with this durability the golem is versatile being able to mold it's body to suit almost all battle situations. Having the power to pop bones out of it's body or even grow back lost parts of it's body. This power has no limits to how much it can be used, but rather must use created jutsu for such functions. As long as the golem's head is still intact or it's body isn't completely in pieces it can regrow bones in place of any lost appendages. Although if the torso or head is destroyed the being loses live an is no longer active.

However, it is extremely hard to do so. Seeing as the bone is so durable and think that most techniques below C-Rank can not do much to the golem and weapons below S-Rank will have no effect on the golem at all. Even so if an opponent were to have such a high ranked weapon techniques below B-Rank will only scratch the bone and not cause any significant damage to show for the enemy's effort.

Even with the bone strong enough to negate the effect of low ranked attacks it also weakens ones that can actually damage it. Causing B, A, and S-Rank attacks to be half as strong and several attempts of such high rank jutsu will be needed to damage the golem.

Appearance:
Weakness:

1. The golem being completely bone can not use any elemental jutsu

2. The golem is not as durable to Kaiton, making one S-Rank attack strong enough to scorch the targeted bone to an ash.



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D-Rank Jutsu: 10 Chakra Cost/ 5 Chakra
C-Rank Jutsu: 25 Chakra Cost/ 12.5 Chakra
B-Rank Jutsu: 40 Chakra Cost/ 20 Chakra
A-Rank Jutsu: 50 Chakra Cost
S-Rank Jutsu: Cannot Use
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14 Re: Akio Kaguya Jutsu [FIN] on Sat Jan 03, 2015 12:30 am

REVIEW.

Bone Golem:
I recommend that you make this a summoning or lower it's duration by half. Not only is it not an S-Rank technique, it also has no real weakness. If bones can protrude from it's body, list how long those bones can become. Is this monster sentient? Meaning it can act on it's own. If so, that's enough reason to make it a summoning technique. Also, it is durable enough to withstand at least two S-Rank Techniques, it itself being B-Rank, it can also half the power of ranks that can actually defeat it. I find that being far too many pros over cons. Maybe you can add that it is slow moving, it is specifically hard damaged by a certain element or style, or something else that could be detrimental to it. Once weaknesses, rank increases or decreases, and balancing is made, this may be approved.


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15 Re: Akio Kaguya Jutsu [FIN] on Sat Jan 10, 2015 1:13 am

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Bump - both bone golem and True power of The Shikotsumyaku


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D-Rank Jutsu: 10 Chakra Cost/ 5 Chakra
C-Rank Jutsu: 25 Chakra Cost/ 12.5 Chakra
B-Rank Jutsu: 40 Chakra Cost/ 20 Chakra
A-Rank Jutsu: 50 Chakra Cost
S-Rank Jutsu: Cannot Use
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16 Re: Akio Kaguya Jutsu [FIN] on Mon Jan 12, 2015 10:49 pm

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Le Bumpety


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E-Rank Jutsu: 5 Chakra Cost/ 2.5 Chakra
D-Rank Jutsu: 10 Chakra Cost/ 5 Chakra
C-Rank Jutsu: 25 Chakra Cost/ 12.5 Chakra
B-Rank Jutsu: 40 Chakra Cost/ 20 Chakra
A-Rank Jutsu: 50 Chakra Cost
S-Rank Jutsu: Cannot Use
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17 Re: Akio Kaguya Jutsu [FIN] on Thu Jan 22, 2015 8:42 pm

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Real quickly, check this thread for the Kinjutsu rules.
Incomplete: So long as you know that Buki and Tai cannot go over Master. So, one question, how does one combat this thing?
Complete: You may want to take another look at your systems, for some stuff share the same post/sacrifice number, such as -2 Posts - 2 Sacrifices and -3 Posts - 2 Sacrifices. Your image doesn't work. And Imma say no to growing to the size of a Bijuu, those chakra beast being very big.
Golem: So basically, no matter what's thrown at it, we are screwed beyond repair unless you basically throw two S-rank techniques at it unless you have Katon? Well that doesn't sound fair at all. As Aerie said, too many pros over cons. You also never specified the length of these bones that protrude from the golem can be, like Aerie asked.

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18 Re: Akio Kaguya Jutsu [FIN] on Mon Jan 26, 2015 7:22 am

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Incomplete: Understandable to the skill boost. As with combat while it would be tough to physically injure the user jutsu would still cause damage and even taijutsu with enough effort.
Complete: With the sacrifices they are separate not total sacrifice therefore for both boost the user would need 4 TOTAL sacrifices. Also if it's okay I could settle with half the size of a bijuu.
Golem: Seeing as 2 S-ranks aren't that much I think it isn't asking much I could argue, but I'm okay with lowering it to 1 S-rank, but I'll be taking away the Katon weakness.

If these changes are okay I'll get working on it after I get the okay.


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Jutsu Costs:

C-Ranked Shinobi Jutsu Costs/Adept Costs
E-Rank Jutsu: 5 Chakra Cost/ 2.5 Chakra
D-Rank Jutsu: 10 Chakra Cost/ 5 Chakra
C-Rank Jutsu: 25 Chakra Cost/ 12.5 Chakra
B-Rank Jutsu: 40 Chakra Cost/ 20 Chakra
A-Rank Jutsu: 50 Chakra Cost
S-Rank Jutsu: Cannot Use
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19 Re: Akio Kaguya Jutsu [FIN] on Tue Feb 03, 2015 7:02 pm

Chikara

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Incomplete: Okay. Get to learning that Kinjutsu.
Complete: Okay.
Golem: Okay. Make sure to add length of weapons created whilst you are editing.

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