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Manda Uchiha : The Myth

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1 Manda Uchiha : The Myth on Sun Nov 23, 2014 12:31 pm




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Name: Manda Uchiha
Nickname: The Phantom Legend
Age: Thirty
Gender: Male
Village: Otogakure
Village Rank: Kage
Skill Rank: S




Height:
5'6ft
Weight: 150lb
Hair color: Black Straight Short Hair
Eye Color: Light Blue
Looks Image:


Looks Description:



- [Head Gear] -

His head gear is an attached white elegant hood which has been passed over by the centuries of an assassin. What makes this hood different from others, is its appearance alone. The hood covers his whole head, then sliding down the back of the neck, where two medium size white collars meet the hood at each end, giving it that prowler look. The next thing you will notice are gold lining at the out edge of the hood, which goes around the edges of the front part of the hoody, where you see it near his face, to the white collar edges, making him look more elegant and possibly military status because of the look. The hood overall has no tear marks, dirty, or anything kind of blemish that you would normally see on a hoody, which compliments the wearer of this hoody because he takes care of it.

- [ Neck Gear ] -

Coming down around his neck, and stopping at the collar bone, is a platinum hand crafted necklace, with the engraved words on the left side of the necklace having his first name, and the right side of the necklace saying his last name. the collar bone reign of the necklace carries a diamond white polish stone which shines in the sun all the time, naturally blinding those who see it when the sun hits. The necklace appears to look like chains wrapping around each other, but any person who loves jewelry will see it as a rare and uncommon item, along with it's exotic look as appearing to be chains.

- [ Torso Gear ] -

White Elegant Military style with the symbols of not that of the military, but that of the assassins order. Each symbol representing something different, the left symbol on the upper left hand corner of his shoulder, having the insignia of two red strips, representing the lost of a family member/members who died during his youth. That same spot, right underneath the red strips, is a black strip, representing that he has never failed a contract mission he was given to assassin a person. Right underneath that symbol, is the insignia of a green snake, this symbol represents overall the number of kills he has done over the past years of being an assassin, however, his differs to others who carry that same symbol, for instance, in the snakes mouth is a black gem, which means that he has killed a fellow assassin member, along with countless other people in general he has killed over the years. The next symbol ever normally earned is a white gem in the snakes mouth, which represents the countless number of people that the assassin has killed over the years. The black gem are only given to those who are traitors or who are lucky to still be in the assassin organization. The last symbol underneath the snake, is a gold lion with red gems in the eyes, which represents the highest rank you can be given in the assassins organization. The torso of the military style uniform, has black medium size buttons going down the center of the uniform, being two inches apart from each other. This prowler looking uniform, reaches down to the ankle of the uniform from the back, while the front part of the uniform, stops down at the stomach area, being tucked in. The shoulders of this uniform has cuffs at the wrist area, with gold lines around the edges of the cuffs, with three gold engraved small snakes with green gems on the eyes. Overall the torso is white, clean, and elegant in appearance, with no dirt, or other blemishes on the clothing.

- [ Bottoms ] -

Elegant well dressed white pants, no dirt, blemish, or anything that would make him look unprofessional. His pants aren't baggy, nor sagging, fits well and he wears a military like belt with several items within those four pouches which are located two in the front and two in the back. The pouch on the left, holds twenty smoke bombs, the pouch on the right, holds twenty poison smoke bombs, left pouch in the back holds twenty poison darts, and the right pouch in the back holds twenty smoke darts.
 


Personality Description:

Due to his upbringing and the events of his past, Manda is immune to feeling guilt in his actions, and is often unpredictable in nature. He has an enormous capacity for knowledge and is extremely intelligent. Manda's most impressive feature coincides with his lack of guilt; he is a paragon at deception and manipulation, as he has no bodily reflexes or moral guidlines that hinder him from lying. In collaboration with his smarts, Manda is able to plan and prepare a situaion before it happens, essentially playing chess with life.

Manda is a temper prone, frustrated, and aggressive man who seeks answers about his origin and place in the world. His trigger happy attitude gets him into more trouble than necessary in the beginning, but also guides him to a legendary journey.

As the series progresses, Manda awakening of power brings forth one-by-one the seven core sins that sleep within him as their master. Although he is tempted by all, his biggest downfall is his pride. Manda becomes detached, uncaring, apathetic, and his confidence turns to arrogance. Manda is calm, collected, cruel, but fair, and extremely confident in his abilities.


Likes: Drinking, killing, smoking

Dislikes: People of power , Being bothered, the wealthy.

Catch Phrases: "Fantasy is my reality"

Nindo: Your family is all you have, when they are gone, you are just hollow.



Element Affinity: Fire
Sub Element Affinity: Water



History:

Book Title - "The Phantom Legendary Assassin"
Author - Unknown

"There once was a boy named Manda Uchiha, he grew up as an orphan and lost both his parents due to war. He was a mysterious boy who never attended any of his classes, but graduated to the rank of genin. The children of his age were puzzled and in shock how he graduated without ever showing up to class at all. When it came to the first chunnin exam he entered, he was reported to the hokage that he got lost, some say he even got eaten by one of the beast in the forest. Two years passed and he showed up again, and during the chunnin exams of those times, every genin registered were dead within the 24 hour time period. At first they thought everyone just killed each other off, but they notice a particular mask on every genin with there teammate laying next to each other.  They search  countless through the forest and around the village, but drew no suspects, however, they later notice that on the back of the mask, a small imprint of the word "Manda Uchiha" was engraved. They recollected their thoughts and knew that Manda Uchiha was rumored to still be alive and started the hunt to track him down. Nothing came up months and years later and the case went cold. Eventually, the jounin exams came around and none of them showed up, later discovered that all of their bodies were laying on there beds in their homes, with the same mask next to them. The kage was wondering what was going on, but before he could really find out where Manda Uchiha was, there was a direct stab through his back, impacting the heart, leaving the kage to die in his office, along with the anbu guards also laying their dead. The story ends with Manda Uchiha burning the whole entire village. The End."

Manda being five years old sat on his dad's lap as his dad told him that whole story. "You don't really believe that story, do you dad?" Manda's dad laughed for a brief moment and looked his son right in his eyes and said, "of course not."

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Manda Uchiha grew up in Otogakure. He was pampered and well loved by his parents. At the age of five, his father read to him a story which would change Manda Uchiha forever. The book that he read to him was very famous in every single village, and anyone who has read it, doesn't really believe that it's possible for a person to do all that, but they enjoyed the story and tell their kids about it at a young age, so those kids would grow up and be strong, so that Manda Uchiha won't get them.  Manda went to the academy like everyone else, but all the kids were terrified of the mention of his name.  The first two days of the academy, and all of the students made sure to be far away from him as possible, this made Manda sad and depressed, having him leave the academy. The children started spreading rumors that he will come out to get them some day, and that the book is real. Manda stayed home and was trained by his dad, who taught him everything and more about the basic academy techniques, along with fire style justus. While the other kids were goofing around with each other and enjoying the days, Manda was training just to be like the legendary man in the story who also had his name. After three years of constant training and isolation from everyone else, he approached the Otokage at the time, along with his former teacher present, and he demonstrated his advance skills and his eagerness to being better than anyone else. They were shocked out how big he could use the fire ball justus, they were impressed on how many clones he could do as a young boy. They were so impressed with him that he graduated to genin. The students who saw him leave the office, saw him with his genin headband and they feared that the story that they were told, was going to come to past. The children tried convincing their parents that the story is real, but they kept brushing it off, knowing that such a story will always be a story. Later on he was put on a genin squad a few years older than he was, and they also were terrified of his name. Manda returned home one night from training with his teacher and other students, that he discovered both his parents were home invaded by a mysterious man and ended both their lives in their sleep. Manda stood over their bodies and cried the whole night. He unlocked his sharingan that night and told himself that he would officially become that legend that everyone fears. Manda vowed he would and took the book that his father had read to him and wondered off into the streets and finding a place to sleep. Manda Uchiha continued his training with his teacher and eventually was given the opportunity to enter the exams at the age of twelve. He aced it and went into the forest of death. Instead of following the team, Manda abandoned them and fell into a pit, which was the lair of a few international shinobi. Once they knew his name and remembered the story that they were told as kids, they wanted to bring this kids dream to reality, which would benefit them since they were international. They decided to leave the village in the covers of night with Manda and there they trained him for three years straight in the outskirts of Otokagure. At the age of fifteen, he came back during the night and awaited for when the chunnin exams would arrive that next day. Manda, along with two accomplices who were A ranked rogue ninja, eliminated all of the students within the exams, and by there side was the same mask on every genin student who registered in the exams. The Otogakure Kage at this point started to believe that Manda Uchiha was not a fairy tale anymore just to scare children, it was actually becoming a real thing. He still was wondering how could a child eliminate all of them by himself. They searched and searched and couldn't find him at all.  By the age of twenty one, after six years of training with his fellow rogue ninjas, he unlocked his mangkyou sharingan by witnessing his best friend who was a rogue ninja, die right before his eyes. Manda went back into the village and the night before the jounin exams, he and his team eliminated a jounin who was going to enter the exams in his place. Manda took the man's face off, placed it on his own, impersonated his voice by using the sharingan to mimic it, and eliminated him. The rogue ninjas dispose of the body rather quickly so no one would ever be able to find it. The following day Manda went to the exams, eliminated the competition since it was a free for all and only the lucky three would become jounin and Manda was one of them. The kage watching the exams unfold noticed that the person listed on the roster wasn't an uchiha, and wondered how he got the sharingan overnight. The kage approached him in secret and Manda surrounded the kage with his rogue anbu members and threaten the kage to give up his title or he would be eliminated. The kage agreed and told him that there would be a ceremony later on this week in retiring from office.


RP Sample:

The rain first started out as a drizzle, the seconds pass and that drizzle turns into a heavy rain. Standing at the center of the vast grass open field surrounded by trees in the distance is Manda Uchiha. His eyes open with such confidence that it turns from regular, to sharingan with three, to the mangkyou sharingan. Three kunais are hurled to his body from a man who appears to be thirty five feet away from him, Manda quickly catching all these kunais, doing what appears to be a dance, he twirls in a 360 after catching them, and sending it right back at his attacker. The attacker being at a daze, seeing how he did that unique technique without worrying about the chance he might miss grabbing them. The attacker taking the impact of kunais that land on his chest, kneeling down, and as the attacker looked to his wound, he takes out the three kunais out of his chest, he then looks forward to see Manda Uchiha crouched right in front of him with a dull unhappy look on his face. The attacker gets startled and shows an expression of being terrified, and being caught off guard, he goes from kneeling to falling on his buttocks, and Manda staring directly at the man's eyes. Which sends him in a genjutsu he will never break out of. Manda snaps his neck in the real world and walks through the open grass field, leaving the scenery.



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2 Re: Manda Uchiha : The Myth on Fri Nov 28, 2014 9:11 am

Nice app, though there's a few things wrong. Firstly, you need staff permissions to be Uchiha. You may already have them. Secondly, Kamel city? Third, can't be S rank without being Anbu Captain or Kage. Fourth, you have no RP sample. Fifth, your back story doesn't make much sense. Its a bit... Medieval for Naruto. There weren't really an abundance of kings and queens in the canon. Sixth, if you are accepted as Uchiha, you MUST start with Katon. Seventh, if you are Uchiha you will need a flashback thread for sharingan training, given its in your back story. Lastly, you cannot gain things given in your back story, such as money


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S-Ranked Shinobi Jutsu Costs:

E-Rank Jutsu: 0 Chakra Cost
D-Rank Jutsu: 1.25 Chakra Cost
C-Rank Jutsu: 3.75 Chakra Cost
B-Rank Jutsu: 6.25 Chakra Cost
A-Rank Jutsu: 17.5 Chakra Cost
S-Rank Jutsu: 22.5 Chakra Cost

Lasting Jutsu Costs
E-Rank Jutsu: 5 Chakra Cost
D-Rank Jutsu: 10 Chakra Cost
C-Rank Jutsu: 15 Chakra Cost
B-Rank Jutsu: 20 Chakra Cost
A-Rank Jutsu: 30 Chakra Cost
S-Rank Jutsu: 35 Chakra Cost


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3 Re: Manda Uchiha : The Myth on Sat Nov 29, 2014 12:49 pm

BUMPED and also got accepted to being uchiha by V

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4 Re: Manda Uchiha : The Myth on Sat Nov 29, 2014 11:30 pm

You're still S rank, and it says Genin with a strike through it. A bit confused on what rank you're going for


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S-Ranked Shinobi Jutsu Costs:

E-Rank Jutsu: 0 Chakra Cost
D-Rank Jutsu: 1.25 Chakra Cost
C-Rank Jutsu: 3.75 Chakra Cost
B-Rank Jutsu: 6.25 Chakra Cost
A-Rank Jutsu: 17.5 Chakra Cost
S-Rank Jutsu: 22.5 Chakra Cost

Lasting Jutsu Costs
E-Rank Jutsu: 5 Chakra Cost
D-Rank Jutsu: 10 Chakra Cost
C-Rank Jutsu: 15 Chakra Cost
B-Rank Jutsu: 20 Chakra Cost
A-Rank Jutsu: 30 Chakra Cost
S-Rank Jutsu: 35 Chakra Cost


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5 Re: Manda Uchiha : The Myth on Mon Dec 01, 2014 8:18 pm

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