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1 Jutsu Lab on Fri Jan 09, 2015 4:14 pm

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Non Elemental Custom:
N/A
Katon Custom:
Name: Fire Release: Fire Dragon Bullet Technique
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Fire
Range: Short to Long Range (0~40 meters)
Duration: 2 posts (If target is hit same post it was used)
Hand Seals/Charge up: Tiger → Ox → Dragon → Hare → Dog → Bird → Rat → Tiger → Dragon → Tiger (Same post)
Description: The Fire Release: Fire Dragon Bullet Technique shapes fire produced by the user into a giant, powerful dragon, which hits the opponent causing severe burns. The amount of fire and size of the dragon depends on the users skill.
Weakness:A Suiton jutsu of equal rank will snuff out the dragon, while a Suiton jutsu of 1 rank lower will make the dragon smaller. Fuuton jutsu of equal or lower rank make the dragon stronger, while fuuton jutsu of a rank higher snuffs it out. Doton jutsu of equal or lower rank will snuff out the drag

Name: Fire Style: Flame Geyser
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Katon
Range: 0-10m
Duration: Instantaneous
Hand Seals/Charge up: Tiger->Dragon->Dog->Boar
Description: Molding ones chakra in their stomach, they expel a small orb of condensed flames which seeps into the earth. Making the surface red hot, this orb may sit underneath the earths surface, for 3 post while costing no chakra, after the 3 post are up the flame dies out. Then at will the orb erupts breaking the surface in a pillar of flames that reaches 15m high and is 5m in diameter.
Weakness:The user can move this orb via mental command, at maximum taijutsu adept speeds, but it can be seen by a faint glow from it heating the surface.

Name: Fire Release: Phoenix Feathers
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu/Kenjutsu
Element: Fire
Range: Short to Mid Range (0~35 meters)
Duration: 1 post
Hand Seals/Charge up: None
Description: The user molds his chakra and using his katana as a extension of his body he sends a barrage of 50 slashes towards his opponent. If fighting in close range his sword katana is still engulfed in flames, but it would be a normal 25 slash combo. If the opponent is not in close combat range then 50 slashes of fire rush towards them; they cause cut wounds as well as burn wounds.
Weakness:A Suiton jutsu of equal rank will snuff out the 'Feathers', while a Suiton jutsu of 1 rank lower will make the 'Feathers' smaller. Fuuton jutsu of equal or lower rank make the 'Feathers' stronger, while fuuton jutsu of a rank higher snuffs it out. Doton jutsu of equal or lower rank will snuff out the 'Feathers'

Name: Fire Style: Flaming Porcupine
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Katon
Range: 0-10m
Duration: 1 Post
Hand Seals/Charge up: Bird->Horse->Ram
Description:[/b] After gathering ones chakra in their gut, they rapidly fire an armada of 25 flaming senbon at their target. Given enough senbon hit, the targets clothing, wood, and other dry flammable materials can be set ablaze.
Weakness:Cannot cut through any other jutsu.

Name: Fire Style: Flamethrower Jutsu
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Katon
Range: 0-5m
Duration: 2 Post
Hand Seals/Charge up:Tiger->Horse->Serpent->Dragon
Description: After molding a considerable amount of chakra in their gut, the users upper torso slightly expands. For the duration of this jutsu, the user can expel a stream of scorching flames from their mouth. They can move while doing this, but any techniques involving handseals made by the user, cancel the jutsu. They may also end the technique prematurely if they please.
Weakness:If any blunt damage occurs to the upper torso while this jutsu is in effect, a puny harmless flame will be unleashed rendering it useless. Suiton jutsu of equal rank or higher can negate the jutsu.
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2 Re: Jutsu Lab on Sat Jan 10, 2015 7:09 pm

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Weaknesses please.

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3 Re: Jutsu Lab on Sun Jan 11, 2015 10:47 pm

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There ya go Anu o:


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4 Re: Jutsu Lab on Tue Jan 13, 2015 6:00 am

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Fire Dragon Bullet: Decrease range, it's far too high for a B rank technique. Also note that by a rule of thumb, or at least mine, your fire technique would do second degree burns, full thickness. Should also note that usually the max range for a B technique is 30m.
Flame Geyser: Okay.
Phoenix Feathers: That's way too many slashes, so decrease the number by a lot.
Flaming Porcupine: How many senbon?
Flamethrower: Gimmie a better weakness.

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5 Re: Jutsu Lab on Tue Jan 13, 2015 7:19 am

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ok


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6 Re: Jutsu Lab on Wed Jan 14, 2015 7:41 pm

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Fire Dragon Bullet: 40m is max for A, exception being sensory, which is more than enough for a range really. Change to 40m and this technique gets my stamp of approval.
Phoenix Feathers: Anu shall help. 25 in close quarters, 50 for far away, in terms of slashes.
Flaming Porcupine: Approved.
Flamethrower: Approved.

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7 Re: Jutsu Lab on Wed Jan 14, 2015 8:26 pm

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There we go


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8 Re: Jutsu Lab on Thu Jan 15, 2015 4:27 am

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All techniques have my stamp of approval.

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