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Ratna's Updates

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1 Ratna's Updates on Thu Jun 01, 2017 1:56 am




Name: Ratna Aruna
Link to Character:
Ratna
Character Template: Shinobi
Clan: Dark Star
Village: Uzushiogakure
Rank: A



Relationships:

  • Bestfriend: - N/A
  • Partner: - N/A
  • Rival: - N/A


Ninja Squad:

  • Squad Name: ~
  • Sensei: ~
  • Team Member 1: - ~
  • Team Member 2: - ~



Ninja Points:

13 total: 10 starter, +1 from 3 point app, +2 from starting during the first month

Purchasing 1 Extra Special Characteristic (8), +50 Extra stats to Distribute as you see fit (4)

13-12=1 point remaining.

Starting Elements: Void, Water

Combat Points:
Starting with 10 (A Rank start) +1 3 point app grade +1 point 125 intelligence
Ninjutsu - Master (4 points)
Medical - Master (4 points)
Taijutsu - Master (4 points)


Bonuses:

  • +40 to chakra (Ninjutsu Master)
  • +40 to Speed, Strength or Stamina (Taijutsu Master)
  • +40 to Chakra (Medical Ninjutsu Master)



Databook Values:

    Template: Shinobi
    230 stats A rank starting +50 stats from 4 points spent = 280 (Disregarding template stats)
    Base template = shinobi
  • Strength: [ Base 25+ 20 allocated] 45
  • Stamina: [ Base 25+ 50 allocated +25 Taijutsu Master] 100
  • Speed: [ Base 25+ 30 allocated +15 Taijutsu Master] 70
  • Intelligence: [ Base 25+ 100 allocated] 125
  • Chakra: [Base 25 + 80 + 72 strength+stamina+speed/3] 177


Derived Values:

  • Reaction Time: (70 + 30 + 30) 130
  • Durability: (45 + 100 / 3 + 30) 78
  • Lifeforce: 40
  • Luck: (125 + 40 / 7 + 5) 29


Special Characteristics:

Execution By Kiss:
Special Characteristic: Execution by Kiss
Tier: Tier III
Type:Physical
Description: This ability allows one to absorb all of an opponent's chakra and techniques by kissing them, giving her multiple elemental affinities, as well as enforcing the ones she already has and gaining access to all of her victim's elemental techniques. After absorbing her opponent's chakra, she could steal their soul. This technique could also be used to determine what elemental affinities the target has by licking them.
Word Count Requirement: 6000 Word Count

Chakra Absorption:

Special Characteristic: Chakra Absorption
Tier: Tier I
Type: Physical Skill
Description: Chakra absorption allow the user to absorb the chakra of another individual - usually an opponent's - and utilise it as if it were their own. This is a temporary thing, lasting only until the end of the topic. By physical contact along, may absorb +10 Chakra for each successful touch. Cannot be combined with Taijutsu Techniques
Word Count Requirement: 1500 Words




Ryo: 8000

Weapons Carried:
3 Packs of 10 Senbon
3 Packs of 10 Shuriken
40 Kunai
10 Smoke Bombs
3 Scrolls
1 Jounin Jacket
1 Forehead Protector
Stored Weapons:

1 Free A Rank Weapon (no abilities)

Jutsu:

2 S-Rank Technique
5 A-Rank Jutsu Techniques
15 B-Rank Jutsu Techniques
20 C-Rank Techniques
20 D-Rank Techniques
All E-Rank Jutsu's



Last edited by Ratna on Tue Jul 11, 2017 3:01 am; edited 2 times in total

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2 Re: Ratna's Updates on Sat Jun 03, 2017 1:31 am

All set and ready for staff!

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3 Re: Ratna's Updates on Sun Jun 25, 2017 10:27 pm

Kaori

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Just a few small things I've noticed:

1: I believe EBK is limited, and as thus cannot count towards the Special Characteristics you have purchased.

2: Your character has not actually been properly approved. I suggest contacting the staff who was grading them.

3: You need to put "Shinobi" under character template if that is the one you have chosen.

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4 Re: Ratna's Updates on Sun Jul 02, 2017 10:19 am

1. EBK is stated to be under Unique Special Characteristics, however they are described as "open for everyone", so there should be no problem.

2. Not sure how my character isn't approved, since Masashi put the stamp and all on it. Does it need to be moved to make it official?

3. Edited the template to reflect that it starts as shinobi.

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5 Re: Ratna's Updates on Mon Jul 03, 2017 4:47 am

Kaori

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ill have t check with admin about EBK. the app does need to be moved for it to be properly approved, but I cant do that since I didn't grade it. as for the last one, alright.

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